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Speech Writing Tips:

Start With the Ending

So you have to give a speech today, in one hour, and no time to write a draft, much less a polished speech.

What do you do?

Nearly all of us have been in a situation where we have no time to write and rehearse an entire speech. In fact, some of the worlds best speeches have been given under these conditions. With no more than an hours time to get ready, it is possible to produce a speech that is not only good, but memorable. The secret is to write TWO sentences: the opening and the ending. Of these the most important sentence is the one that comes LAST.

Your final words are the ones that will be ringing in the audiences ears as you leave the lectern, so think what you want that audience to remember and put it into one strong, well-worded sentence. Make sure it is original. No cliches, no and in conclusion It may be an inspiration, a call to action, or simply a powerful truth, depending upon the purpose of your speech. Say that sentence out loud. Memorize it!

Now you are ready to write the only other sentence you really need to prepare, your opener. You know the formula for that one hook them in, use a joke, a shock, a question, any device that will both make your audience listen and make them receptive to that last sentence. Preparing these two sentences properly may take you an hour, but once that is done you can relax about the words in the middle. As long as you know your subject and know where you must be at the end, you will be able to deliver a compelling, focused talk. As long as that final sentence is well done, your audience will remember. 

 

Who Is Edward O. Wilson? Who Are You?

-- By Jimmy Stanley, ATM-B

From a speech delivered April 22, 2002 

 

 

I believe in Serendipitymaking fortunate and unexpected discoveries by accident.

A few days ago, my wife, Barbara, directed my attention to a notice in the paper that the great biologist E. O. Wilson would be speaking at LBJ Auditorium. I bought a ticket and read two of his books in preparation for the talk. I would like to report to you a few things he says that might help us. At the end of my talk, I would like to challenge you to ask yourself two questions. But, I will save the questions until the end.

Wilson grew up in the Southdifferent places in the Florida panhandle and Alabama. As a boy he became fascinated with the wonder, mystery and beauty of the natural world around him. He loved every aspect of animal life, but he was especially fascinated with the social insects. At 16 years of age he decided to get serious about his career as an entomologist and he decided to focus on ants. He wrote a letter to an ant expert at the National Museum of Natural History. And he sent ant specimens from all over Alabama, labeled and identified. The ant expert responded quicklyyou got half of them right. He did not say, You got half of them wrong. Is there something here that we Toastmasters might learn?

This encouraged Wilson to continue. He earned a Master of Science degree at the University of Alabama. At that point his mother offered to pay his way through medical school, but he declined. He wanted to follow his love of pure science and earned a Ph.D. in entomology at Harvard. Are we following our real love?

Wilson had his share of early failures. He tried high school football and failed to make the second team on a squad of 23. He failed on the track team in college. He lost one eye as a boy. His math ability was not very strong. Yet, he found his nicheoutstanding biologist, naturalist and author. He is a two-time Pulitzer Prize winning author. Wilson wants to tell us that no person does all things well, but every person has certain strengths and abilities. Life is a lot more fun when we discover what our ability is and follow it with enthusiasm.

Wilson greatly admired his Yale professor, Dr. Hutchinson. Hutch trained 40 of the best ecologists and population biologists in the world to the doctoral level. They all seemed to admire and love the man and to have drawn strength and momentum from his example. He welcomed every graduate student into his office, praised everything they did and found some merit in their work. His overgenerous praise did not weaken the fiber of their character. What can we as Toastmasters learn from this man, Hutch?

Wilson is best known for his work on biodiversity He writes that 1.4 million species of life have been identified, which he thinks is only about 10% of the total. He believes that the exciting thing is that in the next 25 years, most of the remaining 90% will be identified.

I promised you that I would conclude this talk by asking you two questions. The first is What truth have you discovered in your life?

Wilson discovered three truths in his life.

    1. Humanity is ultimately the product of biological evolution.

    2. The diversity of life is the cradle and greatest natural heritage of the human species.

    3. Philosophy and Religion make little sense without taking into account the first two conceptions.

The other question I have for you is What one word would you use to describe yourself?

Wilson uses the word, Naturalist. Yes, he is a great biologist and a prize-winning author. But, he sees himself as Naturalist. What one word would you choose to describe and define yourself?

Think about it:

Who are you? And what have you learned? 



A House for Makhosi   

-- By Carol Cespedes, ATM-S

From a speech delivered June 17, 2002 

5:30 am : We boarded our bus for work, still bleary-eyed and fuzzy-headed from jet lag. Fifteen minutes later we were at the worksite, trudging up the hill in chilly darkness. As the sun rose over Durban, South Africa, we set out to find the spot where we were going to build a house. Benny and I had been assigned to house 951, which turned out to be a concrete slab on the hillside with such an inspiring view of wooded hills and city skyline that reminded me a little of our Austin hill country.

Yet these beautiful hills had a troubled past. This was Cato Manor, a township on the fringes of Durban, where in 1968 the government forcibly removed African and Indian residents and destroyed their homes in order to create a kind of no-mans land separating white, Asian, and black neighborhoods in this city. Evicted residents were forced to put up their shanties far away from the city. Now apartheid was gone, but old living patterns remain. This was why Jimmy Carter and Habitat of South Africa decided on this site for the Jimmy Carter Work Project. We were healing and restoring a community.

President Carter and his wife devote one week every year to working actively on Habitat, conducting a blitz build maximum impact in minimum time. Benny and I were there as part of a force of nearly 3000 international volunteers who would join with locals to put up 100 houses, a small community, in one five-day work week.

We greeted other volunteers who were already gathered at the site, and then paused for morning devotions broadcast over the loudspeaker. That was the way we were to begin each morning for the rest of the week predawn bus ride, quick cold breakfast, morning devotions. We were never allowed to forget this project was a work of faith.

Our house leader, Dennis was a carpenter from Long Beach, California. He lined us up and asked, hopefully, Who of you has had masonry experience?

No ones hand shot up although three volunteers admitted to working with concrete block at some point in the past. We were quite a motley crew 10 Americans including retired people, young professionals, and one family of three from Colorado mom and college-student son and daughter. There were about 10 South Africans, including the homeowner, Makhosi Shoba and her father, 2 Koreans, and 1 volunteer from Madagascar. One of the South Africans was a professional plumber, one was a mason, and Hugh, Makhosis father, was a professional housepainter. The rest of us were eager volunteers, some with skills from previous Habitat projects, but others like me simply learning on the job. And learn we did because we had a strict deadline. All houses must be completed and ready to turn over to their owners by Friday afternoon.

Over the next few days we not only learned to lay concrete block, but to build frames, put on a tile roof, set windows and doors, hang drywall, mortar, caulk, paint, landscape, and always clean up! We worked until the sun dropped below the horizon, then walked down to the chow lines for dinner. Even though an exuberant troop of Zulu performers kept the evening air charged with marimba and drum beats, we rode back to the hotel with only enough energy to shower and fall into bed until our 5 am wake-up call.

We were dirty, we were exhausted, we were frequently frustrated by tools that were scarce, calculations that were off, mistakes that had to be undone because of our lack of skill, but we were still a happy crew because every day we saw the little house grow. Everyday we got to know each other a little better. We joked, sweated, argued, and drove Dennis crazy. We were building a team.

And we became especially fond of our homeowner, Makhosi. She was a quiet young woman who had been living in a shantytown with her fiancé and seven-year-old daughter. Makhosis parents were divorced when she was an infant and she didnt know her father until she was in high school. Makhosi had trained as a dental nurse, but her earnings were not enough to buy a house until Habitat for Humanity offered a solution.

Habitat is not your conventional charity where rich people are giving things away to poor people. It is built upon shared work and shared responsibility. The goal is not just the building of houses. It is the building of community. Every homeowner worked side by side with the volunteers, building what Habitat terms sweat equity. The experience of working together creates a bond uniting the people who will live in this new community outside of Durban. And it does even more.

The Jimmy Carter Work Project attracted volunteers from all over South Africa. The South Africans on our work team included a young white speech therapist and an Indian real estate agent, as well as an African mason, and an Indian plumber, and three young Africans of student age. Here we saw the breaking down of social and racial barriers and building of community happen before our very eyes.

Besides Americans and Africans, there were volunteers from Canada, Ireland, Japan, and 50 volunteers from Korea, which was the location of last years Jimmy Carter Work Project. There were volunteers from Egypt, Madagascar, Malawi, and other African countries because our project was simply the culmination of a build taking place all over the African continent, constructing 1000 houses in 18 different countries since January of this year. One of the most exciting things for me was to find people who had benefited from Habitat in their own countries coming to help us in Durban.

On the final day we raced to finish the mudding, painting, and clean-up. Jimmy Carter stopped by with Rosalyn to inspect and congratulate us. We held a little ceremony when the work was finished and formally presented Makhosi with the keys to the house. She cried and hugged each of us, saying it was surely a miracle, a dream come true. Her father, said that he was inspired by the example of the volunteers and planned to continue working as a volunteer for Habitat in South Africa. As we exchanged addresses, said good bye to our new friends and started for the closing ceremonies we understood we had been part of something very important.

We had built a house for Makhosi Shoba, but we had also learned something about ourselves, about our place in the world, about faith and possibility. And we had been privileged to be part of the miracle of reconciliation and community building - in this land of South Africa.

Whence Inspiration?
 
By Scott Shutter

Can you see it? Can you taste it? What does it sound like? What is it? Where does it come from? A fleeting muse? How do we capture it and make it work for us?

A good speech is dependent upon technique, organization and the speakers delivery. But without inspiration that defining, catalytic thought that a skilled speaker uses like a hammer to drive ideas through his audience like a nail through wood a speech is just a collection of words on a page.

Each of us has had the experience of a speech that didnt really work. And when you are facing the blank page good ideas seem to melt into oblivion. So where do we find good ideas for our inspiration and the fire to make it work?

Tonight I am going to share a few of my own personal ideas on the subject and try to persuade you to look in new places for inspiration. I will suggest:

A. Where inspiration can come from

B. How to recognize a good idea

C. The best ways to approach an idea half the battle is in presentation!

D. And the keypreparation!So how do you find inspiration? Whil there are gifted speakers who can make almost any subject inspiring, you will do better by asking some key questions:

What things are important to you?

What makes you mad (think Andy Rooney)?

How does a subject rate on your passion scale?

The Op Ed sections are great places to look for ideas and source material, but be sure to research the subject. And make it personal! If you care you can make others care too

Pick more than one idea to start with. Three seems to work best for me. Next:

Test your ideas on your personal passion scale.

Consider your audience and their nature (your passion may simply raise the ire of others and backfire. Remember you want to win them, not just raise their passions)

Then test your ideas in conversation

If you are still in doubt as to whether the idea has potential take a stab at writing it. If it doesnt come without forcing then pick something else.

If you are comfortable with the idea share something very personal. Some of the better speeches I have seen in this club were born from the pain, fear and love of some of our fellow Toastmasters.

The personal approach can help connect you with your audience. Remember to keep it simple. Do not dive too deep or you will lose themWhen do you know you "have it," that idea that will work?

Just how passionate are you about the idea? Could you talk about it all night long? Can you feel yourself getting emotional? Do you get a passionate reaction from your test subjects?

If you are answering yes to these questions, you need to consider whether it will work for your audience:

Can you present the topic without upsetting or angering the group?

Do you have enough information to change their mind or move them to take your desired action?

In short, can you inspire them?

If you respond to it and it is right for your audience, then run with it.How do you approach your idea in a way that will draw your audience in?

Tuck has a great way of taking the familiar and presenting it in a way that makes us look again. The key is to make is as new and different as possible make the audience work a little.

Embrace the unusual and take a chance!Of course all of this is meaningless unless you prepare yourself.

My approach involves first writing out the speech. Then convert that into an outline with the main thoughts for each section. After that, I read it to myself at least ten times in the mirror six with the outline and four without. Check for time, vocal variety, and watch for gestures

So remember my recipe for inspirational speaking:

Find something that really inspires you

Try it out, remembering your audience

Come up with an unexpected approach

Prepare, prepare, prepare.

Then, you will really have everything you need to inspire your audience.

Where does a winning speech come from? Before he became the Tejas speech contest winner, Scott Shutter shared his personal techniques for preparing inspirational speeches for any occasion.

Scott, a senior account supervisor for Kolar Advertising and Marketing, is a man for all seasons, demonstrating his zest for adventure and fine food in a series of entertaining speeches as well as at the club party hosted in his home last Christmas. He shares the club office of Secretary with his wife, Maria Cordero-Shutter.